Pitch Feedback

Teacher Feedback:

Positive - "Good example of indie rock", "Great ideas for the website - like the homage idea", "Excellent choices of research"

To improve - "Be careful with colour grading, always shoot with as bright light as possible and adapt in editing process", "Ensure you have digital convergence between the two products."

Student Feedback:

Positive - "I love the narrative", "Meets the brief, good song", "Great ideas for video and digital convergence, lots of good research", "Really good, well thought-through", "Song matches well", "Intertextual references work with your concept", " Colour schemes also work well."

To improve - "Lighting at night may be hard"

Personal Reflection:

From getting this feedback I have decided to stick with my idea and aesthetic as it seems to work well. I think I need to develop my intertextuality and homage ideas even further as those ideas received positive feedback so I'd like to make it a key element. I need to reconsider my filming arrangements as I've gathered that it will be difficult to film at night due to lighting issues. I also should practice my colour grading skills as this will be a tricky part of the editing process. I also need to ensure I have sorted out digital convergence as that is key. I also should begin to design a logo for my band's name.

From Mr Escott's comments, I think I will need a better ending for the narrative part of the video, with everyone from the party dancing on the beach perhaps instead of just the two girls dancing so its stronger and more impactful.